Thursday, 27 February 2020

How to Write a Newspaper Article  
Rules:
1) Use a catchy title that, if possible, has a pun.
The Fountain of Youth is no more than a Greek Island or Vacation Spot
Like Fine Wine the People of Ikaria Age Well
Foreign Correspondent: Rupert Middleton
2) The story is an inverted pyramid or upside-down triangle. 
Who?  The Greek inhabitants of Ikarai.
Where? It is a remote island 50 km off the coast of Turkey, yet it is a part of Greece.
What? The food, the diet and the social support allows many to live over the age of 100. 
Why? Doctors and reporters have been sent there to document this situation. 
When? The inhabitants have been living longer there for over 9000 years.
How?  They are very active and happy. 







3) The first paragraph must answer all W5 questions. Who? What? Where? When? Why? How?
  The Greek inhabitants of Ikaria who live on a remote island 50 km off the coast of Turkey live well over a hundred years because of their diet, and their social support networks. Doctors and reporters have been sent there to study and document this situation. Overall, it is known to be a happy, healthy, and active corner of the Earth. 
4) Further details or quotes are included in the subsequent paragraphs.
*Despite smoking, there are some who live over 100 years of age.
*Food is not processed and people raise their livestock or they gather their own fruits and vegetables.  
*Elderly people semi-retire, and it is considered wrong to put grandparents in retirement homes.  
*People in the interior climb hills daily.
*Some people believe the radium levels or the herbal teas promote longevity. 
*People are not excluded at the dinner table.  Children are seated with adults.
*The evenings are social with festivals, cafes, and public gatherings.  
*Even the dances are group or social activities. 


5) Edit and place in 3 columns using 12 to 14 font.  Be sure to include your name and some bullet quotes.
“Their hearts are twenty years younger than most people.”

  1. Catchy title
  2. W5 or inverted pyramid paragraph
  3.  Edited first paragraph
  4. Add further details and bullet quotes
  5. Edit and place into 3 columns

Wednesday, 19 February 2020

Here are two examples of completed movie reviews:

Title: Moana Sails into your Hearts
Introduction
From the musical South Pacific to the popular television series about Gilligan Island, the public has always been fascinated with this remote part of the world that is dotted with cays, volcanic islands, and archipelagos.  It is surprising that Disney took this long to discover this as the perfect setting for its latest movie, Moana.   The audience is taken to an exotic location in the heart of the South Pacific where a spirited youth and a demi-god entertain viewers.
Body
Summary of Synopsis of Moana
Moana lives in a seemingly flawless South Pacific island that is sheltered behind a coral reef and abundant in coconuts. At an early age, we learn that Moana is chosen by the sea and lured by the sea- much to the disapproval of her stubborn yet loving father.  She is clearly groomed for leadership.  On this Polynesian island, the role of chief is passed to son or daughter.  She is the chosen one.  The duties include ensuring that the villagers have adequate and sustainable housing, food, activities, and customs.  At one point, she will make her mark on the highest point of the mountain or lay her stone and assume leadership.  Here comes the initial crisis: the coconut harvest fails due to blight; the fishermen’s nets return empty; the villagers seemed doomed. 
Luckily, through her ailing grandmother, she learns that her people were once a sea-faring nation and if she could only go beyond the reef, perhaps, she could locate the demi-god Maui and restore peace and harmony to the disrupted flow of nature.
Upon finding Maui, we learn that he is a disgraced and vain a god who has been banished to a desert island for stealing the heart of nature. Worse yet Maui has had his wings clipped or magical fisherman’s hook taken by a crusty old crab whose vanity outshines the Great-but-not-so-Humble Maui. 
Moana is initially tricked by him, but asserts her role as the provider of her people.  The two fight off a deadly flotilla of pirate coconuts and seek the hook that will restore Maui’s ability to shape- shift. Once they have defeated the marauding gang of fuzzy coco-sapiens they must meet the ominous crab who hordes Maui’s shiny hook.  Here we learn that Moana is clearly more clever than the muscle bound disgraced hero and the gluttonous crab.
With the hook, the audience is further drawn into the movie.  Now the two can defeat the fire monster and restore the heart of nature.   Our heroine challenges Maui’s level of self-doubt and dives deep into the reasons why he chose to abandon his role or servitude to mankind.

Criticisms
            My own knowledge of Polynesian history is limited, and I somewhat cringe when Disney practises a form of ‘cultural appropriation’ in which they choose an exotic location, hire a number of academics and actors from the region, and retell stories with a very North American twist.  Polynesians arrived in parts of Australia nearly 4000 years ago and for some unknown reason did not colonize islands such as Samoa until 2000 years ago. They took a break and this was perhaps due to climatic change and weather patterns.

  Maui is portrayed as a vain, beefy, and middle-aged character. Clearly, the Rock was a good choice for that portrayal.  In Polynesian culture, according to smithsonian.com Maui is more mischievous and is more like a rebellious teenager who “borders on manhood.” Life in South Pacific was far from paradise or simplified as natives consuming coconuts and living in perfect harmony with nature. Yes, they left a smaller carbon footprint but the movie takes a place and people and almost trivializes them for the sake of profit.  We are reminded that, then again, it is a Disney movie and not meant to be more than a form of escapism.


 Hunger Games Stirs my Appetite!

Imagine a world not so different from ourselves, however, rather than different geographic regions, imagine that there are economic regions based on production.  Then, you need to imagine a world not led by elected officials, but rather a world led by a dictator.  If you have an appetite for this, you will truly relish the dystopian world, entitled ‘The Hunger Games.’

I highly recommend the first installment of this trilogy for several clear and very tasty reasons.  First of all, the plot –although not original- is well constructed.  Essentially, after a catastrophic war, the former North America is forced into a New World Order in which each region produces goods for a privileged minority who inhabit the Captitol.  In order to keep the population occupied and, of course, compliant, each year, two representatives are chosen through a lottery system to compete in an outdoor competition.  The last person standing is declared the winner.  Here is the twist.  The two ‘star crossed lovers, much like the Shakespearean classic, Romeo and Juliet, win the hearts and minds of the population.  As a result, the two characters, in the first part, are allowed to live. 

The acting for the most part is rather simplistic.   Clearly, the main character Katniss is a precocious and an agile competitor in the Hunger Games who serves as the main heroine.  She is a brooding character with good intentions, but she is very cold and distant.  Thus, her character, who has difficulty ‘winning over friends,’ must learn to win over the hearts of the audience.   She is often too ‘brash’ and too ‘full of attitude,’ yet she is very characteristic of most anti-heroes in novels.  The special effects are not overplayed.  The computer generated images of the city present a flawless and sprawling urban center that acts as a cosmopolitan paradise for the elites of society. 

The best part of all involves the costumes.  In the near future or possibly an alternative world, those in power have an absurd amount of time and therefore pursue outrageous fashion styles. One woman has heavily caked on make up while another man has a beard with swirling details.  The suffering masses who live in the hinterland dress in rather drab clothing to represent their working or toiling class status.

Although the movie is well suited for a teen audience, it is able to captivate the attention of both young men and women since it plays on the elements of romance and action.  There is a clear love interest between the main character and one of her advisors, but the two representatives from their district must put on the air of being in love in order to persuade the sponsors and the viewers to follow them.  This bizarre love triangle is quite unique since the audience is kept wondering if Katniss truly loves the other representative from her district.  There are effective flashback scenes too in which we find out that Katniss had a challenging upbringing and that her supposed ‘boyfriend’ in the Hunger Games once offered a stale and discarded loaf of bread.

The mood is very contrasting.  The televised show or competition is very much a reality program no different than the shows such as Survivor or the Amazing Race. The only main difference is that the first price in this movie is life whilst others are awarded deaths.  In fact, several themes or messages can be gleamed from the movie.  Obviously, the movie explores how governments attempt to control their population through the use of media, propaganda, hope, and other means of manipulation.  There is definitely a clear struggle between the ‘have’ and ‘have nots’ of this society.  The most controversial topic is the state approved use of violence to quell or control the population.   The viewers do not ‘bat and eye’ when children slaughter other innocent children in the name of entertainment. In fact, the Games even have sport like commentators and celebrity correspondents to bring hype and humanity to the citizens of the Capitol.

In that respect, I would not recommend this movie to children under twelve.  Those who are over twelve may be accompanied by an adult.  Older teens can handle the more mature themes.  Much like the novel, the Lord of the Flies, which is introduced in grade 10, the movie examines a tribal situation in which children must cope with their inclinations to form groups or alliance in order to survive amongst themselves. Parents can use this movie as a point of discussion whether reality shows encourage certain behaviors or the possibility of our society degenerating into something similar as the world of Panam.

In terms of casting, the director was flawless. The best character, an advisor, played by Woody Harrison, steals many scenes.  Although he is introduced as a bitter veteran of the reality show and an alcoholic, he proves to be a clever tactician and aid for Katniss.  As he staggers into the luxury train car in his initial scene, you are left wondering how he possibly won a previous episode of the Games.  He is weary of the world and is fueled by a steady addiction to alcohol.  Woody’s character is able to gain our admiration as the movie advances.

Overall, the Hunger Games is a meal fit for a king and a gourmet movie of its time.  I highly recommend the movie to young adults. The movie could easily be rated “for ages 12 +.”  I give it a four out of five stars and look forward to the next installment of this clever franchise.

Mr.  Paralusz


          5.  What made the actors brilliant in their roles or not eventful in their roles?   Who would you have cast in their roles?
         6.  What was the structure or narration of the movie? Did the movie move in a chronological order from the past to the present or did it tell the story from the end to the beginning?  Was this a good choice?
         7. How did the director choose lighting or setting to establish a certain mood?  What overall mood was established?  Was the movie shot in black and white on purpose to create a certain mood?  Was there any sense of where the movie took place or could it have taken place in any North American city?
         8.  What was the overall or underlying message of the movie?  Was there a hidden moral message or did the movie make a commentary on any problems in society or the world?
         9.  Did the director choose popular music or songs to keep the audience entertained or engaged?  What songs or sound effects were used?  Also, were the special effects unrealistic, crude, choppy, or cutting edge?  What scenes did you like the most and why?
       10. Develop an overall rating system or trademark.  It could be a star system, a report card, a rubric, series of emoticons, or a simple thumbs up or down rating.

Tuesday, 18 February 2020

 3. Recommend the movie to an audience. 
The movie may not be suited for a certain demographics or
segment of the population.  This may include age, gender, interests,
genre, and even socio-economic background. 
For example, a teen drama may appeal mainly to teenage
girls who have an interest in high school cheerleading or it may
appeal to all ages.

      4.  Give the reader a brief plot summary or synopsis. Try not to go into great detail but try to discuss the elements of plot such as setting, main characters, initial crisis or problem, rising action or series of challenges, the climax, and the resolution of the initial conflict.  You may discuss various themes such as person against person, person against nature,  person against machine, person against oneself or person against the supernatural.  Avoid spoilers or giving away the entire movie or ending.

Thursday, 13 February 2020


 How to Write a Movie Review:
Task: Students are required to think of any movie that they have watched and to write a review. Your review has essentially ten sections with a captivating introduction and witty conclusion.
1.     Think of a movie that you have recently watched.  It does not have to be your favorite.  In fact, it is easier to write about a movie that you disliked.  Most importantly, you must be articulate or precise about what you disliked or liked about the movie.  Avoid the following simple, vague, or ambiguous words:
a)       good, great, super…
b )   bad, terrible…
c)    interesting, unusual, different…

*Avoid clichés or sweeping statements, such as, “The greatest movie ever!”
        2. Before you begin, provide your opinion by filling in a chart: using jot notes, explain what was effective and what was ineffective. These headings are just examples:

Plot
Acting
Special Effects
Conflict
Set
Strong





Weak






Monday, 3 February 2020

Here is an example of how to do the 'like' section of your book review.  It is due Monday, February 10th, 2020. 
Be sure to have about three pages:
a) a one page list of all the things you liked
b) a one page chart, using the S.E.E. method, that focuses on only three main likes
c) a final copy of your likes in paragraph format on one page
d) staple the pages together and include your name

List all the things that you liked in the book and make note in which chapter or page(s) the events occurred.
Likes
Chapter 1:  The author uses metaphors such as “the message spread, faster than a winging bird.”
Chapter 3: We learn of the importance of Quakers and their opposition to slavery.
Chapter 4: Julilly’s character is developed by demonstrating that she is willing to help others by lifting their chains.
Chapter 5: The mood becomes very dark and sinister since it was absent of speech.  The slaves did not communicate unless it was related to work and there was no evidence of singing or dancing.
Chapter 6: Julilly again demonstrates her willingness to help others.
Chapter 7: Rumours are circulated by anti-Abolitionists about cannibalism in Canada. This is meant to counter plans to escape by creating anti-propaganda.
Chapter 9: I learned what a whippoorwill is or that it is a bird. I learned about the trees found in the South.
Chapter 9: Adam is surprised that Mr. Ross does not have slaves. This demonstrates that Adam who is denied access to education, travel, and rights can accept an alternative to the only world that he knows.
Chapter 11: We learn about the Fugitive Slave Act. 
Chapter 14: The Underground Railway was a series of safehouses or points that acted as stations.  Those involved were like conductors. There was no train, but the girls walk along a set of railway tracks that are symbolic of the ‘Underground Railway.’  Underground is simply figurative for a secret network. Escaped slaves were referred to as ‘freight.’
Chapter 15: There was an Abolitionist, named Levi Coffin, and he was instrumental in the Underground Railway.
Chapter 16:  Donnelly will return and this adds more tension.
Step 4: Try to place them into categories that apply to literature.  Here are several things that make or break a book. DO NOT WRITE VAGUE STATEMENTS. EACH POINT MUST BE FOLLOWED BY A SPECIFIC EXAMPLE AND DETAILS.
Wrong: I liked the metaphors in the book.
Right:  One of the strengths in the book includes the use of metaphors.  For example, in chapter one, the author writes, “the message spread, faster than a winging bird.” This figure of speech is effective since it suggests that the news about the Underground Railway not only spread quickly, but it took flight.  It even hints at the idea of freedom since it is connected to birds.
Step 5: After you have chosen 3 things that you liked. Decide on which category it falls into or how you would describe what you like in a statement. Order them from your weakest to strongest, so the reader remembers the last and most effective point.
Likes
Statement                   Example                     Details/Elaboration
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1.______________________________________________________
2.______________________________________________________
3.______________________________________________________
Step 6: Put together your paragraph using your chart.  Add some transitional words (First, Second, Furthermore, Above all…).  Edit your work. Submit.





Step 7: Repeat the same process, but find 3 things that you disliked. Once you complete the chart, write and edit your paragraph.
Statement                   Example                     Details/Elaboration
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1.______________________________________________________
2.______________________________________________________
3.______________________________________________________
*plot         *character *conflict/struggle   *theme/messages   *setting details
*use of repetition or reoccurring words or phrases for emphasis or symbolism
*the types of struggle: person against person, persons against self, person against nature or person against the supernatural
*developed or undeveloped characters i.e. reasons for characters distinct motives or beliefs
*the level of background information/historical information or lack of background information/historical information
*how effective was the initial crisis which got the plot to develop
*the series of events that leads to the climax and how effective or possible were they
* the end should resolve initial conflict or initial crisis
*the most important chapter of the book and why
*the main character has a moment of self-realization or an ‘epiphany’ that the main character has in the story
*the level of suspension of disbelief or how the author was able to make something unbelievable rather believable
*the characters demonstrate their personalities through their actions
*the characters represented bigger ideas or abstract concepts such as love, hate, jealousy, bigotry or forgiveness
*the unique style or sense of humour of the author
*the writer’s distinctive voice or use of clichés (overused expressions, ideas, characters, or stories)
*the level of realism in terms of soliloquies (personal conversations to oneself made by a character) and the level of realism in terms of dialogue between characters
*the level of symbolism and imagery in the novel i.e. Aminata carried a copy of Gulliver’s Travels which symbolized or represented how her life like the main character lived in lands where one can be vulnerable.
*the level of cohesion or how it all stuck together
*the types of word or vocabulary choice being to simple or complexed
*the level of imagination and originality used by the author
*the number of oxymoronic/contradictory/illogical events (things that contradict or do not make things logical)
*anachronistic events i.e. these are historically inaccurate things such as the story using gunpowder when it was not widely used or invented when the story takes place
*the sense of mood developed i.e. gloomy or utopian
*the use of foreshadowing or how the author provides clues as to what was going to happen in the story i.e. a black raven appears before someone dies
*the use of metaphors, similes or personification in the story
*the chronology, narration or telling of the story and how easy or difficult it was to follow
*things that could have been done differently or what was lacking i.e. the closure or lack of closure to the novel